seamusTX wrote:Most likely the deceased officer was trying to do the right thing.
What is it that trickles down?
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Actually, ELB mentioned it...which is what I suggested he change!
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- Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:22 pm
- Forum: The Crime Blotter
- Topic: NY: Police officer shot dead by other officers
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Re: NY: Police officer shot dead by other officers
Actually, ELB mentioned it...which is what I suggested he change!
- Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:21 pm
- Forum: The Crime Blotter
- Topic: NY: Police officer shot dead by other officers
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Re: NY: Police officer shot dead by other officers
ELB,
check the wording of the last half of the last sentence of paragraph 3.
The word immediately preceeding "down his business until he could finally get them back, no doubt after much legal effort." ought to be personally spell-checked as the machine spell-checking didn't catch the grammatical error.
Otherwise...GREAT post.
check the wording of the last half of the last sentence of paragraph 3.
The word immediately preceeding "down his business until he could finally get them back, no doubt after much legal effort." ought to be personally spell-checked as the machine spell-checking didn't catch the grammatical error.
Otherwise...GREAT post.